Ten Ways to Tighten Your Writing & Hook the Reader

This is an awesome ‘tight’ list of things to help …

Kristen Lamb's Blog

Screen Shot 2013-03-15 at 9.40.52 AM Image via CellarDoorFilms W.A.N.A. Commons

When I used to edit for a living, I earned the moniker The Death Star because I can be a tad ruthless with prose. Today I hope to teach you guys to be a bit ruthless as well. Before we get started, I do have a quick favor to ask. Some of you may know that I practice Brazilian Jiu Jitsu so I’ve taken on our dojo’s blog to see if we can try out new and fun content and am using the moniker Dojo Diva.

I posted about how hard it is to begin and the fears that can ever keep us from starting. The way others try to stop us from doing anything remarkable. I’d love to hear your thoughts and stories, so I hope you will stop by and get the discussion going.

Click the word “Comments” and a box should appear…

View original post 1,899 more words

Time, how quickly you fly by!

Here we are in the fall already, and yes, I’m still doing my gratitude journal, but it’s over on facebook.

I end every day with a post, just a few sentences stating what I am grateful for that day. I sleep better by concentrating on the positives. They stop the negative loops that can keep one awake at night and miserable.

And no, the gratitude doesn’t have to be earth shattering. Sometimes I’m simply grateful for having spotted pretty blue flowers living in the ditch alongside the road.Continue reading “Time, how quickly you fly by!”


Have you ever really thought about telepathy? Is it possible? Or is it something for books and movies?

Well some of my favorite authors include telepathy in their books, so it’s not the least bit surprising it keeps showing up in mine. I absolutely love when characters are communicating silently, and I don’t mean texting!

So, I’ve been forced to actually think about telepathy, even talk about it out loud with the few people who won’t think I’ve completely lost it.Continue reading “Telepathy”